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Post by Winterstar on Jun 7, 2010 19:27:22 GMT -5
Name: Winterstar Gender: She-cat Age: 32 Clan: OakClan Rank: Leader Mate: None Kits: None Description: Winterstar is of course a white cat with dark blue eyes. She is usually kind to her clanmates, and fierce in battle. History: Kithood: During the first moon her brothers, Snowkit, Yellowkit, Blackkit, and Moonkit died from the cold of leafbare, and she was lucky to survive. Her father, Sparkstorm, died in a battle with rogues.
Apprenticeship: Fairly normal apprenticeship.
Warriorhood: She was given the warrior name Winterstorm, and she fell in love with a warrior name Mossfur. However, Mossfur died when a snake got into the camp and it bit him on the shoulder. Her mother, Whitefoot, also died of greencough.
Deputy: Winterstar was chosen as deputy after the former deputy was captured by twolegs.
Leader: She became leader after she witnessed her former leader die in the jaws of a loose twoleg dog. She recieved her nine lives from Snowkit, Yellowkit, Blackkit, Moonkit, Sparkstorm, Mossfur, Whitefoot, the former deputy, and her former leader. RP Example: Winterstar snickered at the rogue that dared trespass on her territory. She unsheathed her claws and lashed her tail, waiting to leap if the rogue attacked. The rogue was a young brown tom, this was probably his first time in the forest. Picture:
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Post by Giza on Jun 10, 2010 15:11:23 GMT -5
Great job! 8DDD Just a tip to lengthen your playing posts: describe your own cat and the surroundings in more detail, use metaphors and imagery... But still, doing wonderfully already <333 Can't wait to see you roleplaying with everyone else!
ACCEPTED as leader of OakClan.
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